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Photography Photography \ Figure | 04/06/07 @836 | Sharkh20 | Comments critiques (20) | Views views (653)


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So I was going to draw this, but then I decided it worked better just as a photograph. Anyways I do not really know much about photography and I changed the brightness and contrast so I am not sure if this belongs in photo manip or something. Yea...Rebel XT, don't remember the iso or anything. Feel free to tell me everything that is wrong with it :)

*Made the face a little sharper now
*even sharper still
 
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Avatar Tommyguns

 04/06/07 @856

What's goin' on Pat? The composition is good and I think your contrast is also descent. I wish the image were a bit clearer and sharper though. I find the background a little distracting. If that were a solid white wall...you'd hit it right on! Keep up the work man! +8

Tommyguns
 
Avatar ViolentContact

 04/06/07 @867

Nah, contrast/brightness editing doesn't belong to photomanip, don't worry ;)
Good composition and the contrast is all right.
The background is out focus and the face in focus, that's clear, but face could be sharper :)
Nice haircut by the way!
+9
 
Avatar Sharkh20

 04/06/07 @888

made the lights a little sharper on the face
 
Avatar tomato04

 04/07/07 @033

sexy^^ i dont know much about photography either, but i like the shadows and the fact that you can only see one eye :)
 
Avatar RizzoMattos

 04/07/07 @139

Agree with tommygun about the sharpness the contrast and composition. Great Close up too.
 
Avatar bakatron

 04/07/07 @456

excellent details 10/10
 
Avatar Dutch-Memory

 04/07/07 @477

Good lightning and contrast!
But as Tommyguns said, background is distracting.
Still a good job:)
 
Avatar Madanapale

 04/08/07 @963

Nice portrait and mood!.....agree about distracting background.
Carlos
 
Avatar ClaraSoto

 04/08/07 @098

Agree on BG !! ... you look a bit like my brother....hehehehe!!! I am willing to go back to the aquarium in a day less crowded !! OMG there were thouthans!!! Your portrait is very good !!! you can see the metadata in the program you used to fix the photo... everything from camera info to the day you shot !!
 
Avatar Sharkh20

 04/08/07 @103

Haha I had no idea, I have to check that out, thanks so much. Yeah, people go to that aquarium by the bus load. I guess it is just a lot of school field trips or something.
 
Avatar kittyKat

 04/08/07 @770

 
Avatar Sharkh20

 04/08/07 @774

haha thanks Kat
 
Avatar alebrije

 04/09/07 @255

Nice contrast! (thumbup)
 
Avatar cupcake

 04/10/07 @959

Very good
 
Avatar Skunk

 04/12/07 @826

cool stuff! i only would delete the background and make it either white or black but the objects are a bit disturbing +8
 
Avatar razpna

 04/15/07 @835

oh sorry,i missed this i think this is good ,may be much light in eys would be better
 
Avatar cnell

 04/15/07 @880

i really like the shot, only thing missing is a little twinkle in the eye ;)
  • claudia
 
Avatar Wallace

 04/23/07 @702

Dramatic lighting with strong shadows

Nice shot!

I agree about missing some highlight in the eye,
would make it perfect

Anywayz + 10:)
 
Avatar fabioc

 05/03/07 @762

I like it. Very expressive, and the shadows are very cool.
 
Avatar Gavade

 05/17/07 @978

The intense shadows are cool, great shot . . . .
 
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